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Tuesday, October 11, 2011

10-10-11 HOW DO I BEGIN?

Today, students continued their study of descriptive writing.  We listened to a short story all the while identifying good descriptive language including "specificity" like Bedford Junior High versus a school.  We took a look at different types of beginnings AKA:  leads, grabbers and hooks and saw examples written by teachers in the building.  Students were able to see how to write 3 different beginnings for one topic and decide which was the best.  In other words, what made them feel like they wanted to hear the rest of the story. 

HOMEWORK:  to practice,students are sketching their room and describing it by showing us what the room looks like versus telling us.  I can't wait to hear them tomorrow!

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